I held you close for one last time, just as the funicular reached the terminus. This was the first time in our lives I had the courage to tell you how I felt. I know the timing wasn’t right, but I got the feeling this would be the last time we were going to see each other, so I just had to say it.
We were born 2 weeks apart and have been constantly in each others company for the entirety of our 18 years. I had girlfriends through high school, but soon left them when they couldn’t get along with you. Just as I am sure your boyfriends jealousy drove a wedge between you and them. None of them understood what we mean to each other.
Now you are leaving, off to see the world and study in Beijing. I know you will make good with your life and be all that you can be. I really don’t know how long it will take me to get over you, but I know that it will be equally hard for you. Though, from what you have said you have never felt anything but brotherly and sisterly love between us. I know I shouldn’t feel the way I do, but I can’t help it.
I just wish our fathers were not brothers.
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January 29, 2013 at 2:46 pm
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January 29, 2013 at 6:11 pm
very touching!
January 29, 2013 at 6:12 pm
Thank you for taking the time to read my post.
January 29, 2013 at 7:02 pm
Nice one dear
January 29, 2013 at 7:13 pm
Thank you, I like your post too. Thanks for taking the time to read.
January 29, 2013 at 10:40 pm
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January 30, 2013 at 3:46 pm
Very different take on the pic. Nicely done.
February 1, 2013 at 6:00 pm
Very deep emotions .. beautifully written. It is hard to be separated from someone who means that much to you.
February 6, 2013 at 3:57 am
Love it! Not the ending i was expecting.